Tuesday, March 23, 2010

Coldness Comments

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coldness engolfs his heart
blocking feeling of dispair
from breaking the already fragile heart
coldness blocking feeling from her heart
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Adrian Ivashkov
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Little Cat 01 April 2010

I really like the poem, but the typo bugs me. 'i weas the world that froze their hearts'. 'weas' is not a word~! : P

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