Coldness Comments
The glimpse of dark night shivered and overwhelmed
Lightning like a splash of fire fiercely terrorized
Mountainous valley retreated and succumbed
Oak and maple homes enlightened with animosity
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Great job Sulaiman! I feel the chill and can see your talent in black and white! I was drawn to the title because I wanted to see what you had to say about being cold or if it was just a symbol of something else..... Great imagery throughout! Take care of U Shelley
Thanks a lot and Sulaiman you are an imaginative poet, liked your work.
Winter shivers described perfectly. Thank You Sulaiman.
Excellent imagery. Your poem is winter white. Ten without hesitation. Warm regards, Sandra
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7/18/2025 8:42:11 PM # 1.0.0
You have a great imagination i flowed with it since i am soo cold at this moment it was great!