Coldness Comments

I am digging into the ice land..... sweet poetic expression. A beautiful poem...top score.

The earth is cold, the sky is grey I'm digging, I'm digging into the ice-land For words, for songs For thoughts, for dreams.......so touching and impressive. A beautiful poem on winter nicely executed,10.

I'm lost in a winter haze, wandering through a misty maze The earth is cold, the sky is grey................. Beautiful lines! This is how we feel at times! But sure you will behold brighter visions beyond the haze. Enjoyed reading this beautiful poem!

A nice metaphor, apparently it's a description of an icy winter but in fact the lines of this poem are frozen sighs on emptiness of life. A beautiful poem.

Trees are poems the earth writes upon the sky, We fell them down and turn them into paper, That we may record our emptiness. — Kahlil Gibran The ice will melt, the birds will sing and so does your pen will dance to the tune of your thoughts. Till then enjoy the solitude. Beautiful poem... I can feel the emptiness...10 without a second thought.

Digging in winter is not always fun but it develops disciple that can propel us from good to great! This fact has been nicely expressed in your poem!

A simply beauty there is in your poem.....liked it....thank you for sharing :)