Cold Wintertime Comments

Ah u make me jealous with this poem....i mean i have always wanted to see it snow but havent yet...poor me lol.... Anyways ur poem was fantastic and gave me a reason to smile....very good Thanks for making me see a bit of tht beauty of winters and snow.... :) .., u \m/

it's rainy in egypt but not snowy! .. i feel the coldness going out from your poem..! ..btw, happy new year in advance..

You have derived a good poem to keep the spirit warm from this cold wintertime. Your imagery is beautiful and you have spontaneity in your poetic expression. Keep it up, Gloria. Best Wishes. Naseer

Good write Keep expressing your self

There's a large amount of repetition of white in this poem. Basically, you're explaining how pure and good Winter and Christmas is. Interesting.

LOVE this poem it helps me imagine how canada i rit now gaveu a 10/10 u deserve it :)