Monday, August 8, 2005

Cold Wind Comments

Rating: 4.8

I wish I were like you
All cool and streamlined
But
I am not
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Scott Clegg
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Max Reif 15 August 2005

your poetic juxtaposition (I paid 50c for that word) of her breath and the cold wind is nice. Your sentiments are sincerely reflected and well expressed by your poem. possibly a little idealization of the person described, but that's not really a poetry critique, and it may also be humanly univeral (I tend to do it too) .

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Maggie Flanagan-Wilkie 14 August 2005

A nice piece, Scott.

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Uriah Hamilton 09 August 2005

My reaction from the ladies as well(smile)

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