Tuesday, February 26, 2008

Cold Turkey Comments

Rating: 4.9

I woke up next morning crimping
Distraught and dejected
Body aching everywhere
I got no zest left
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
mom
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Rosie Rainey 08 August 2009

im happy for you that you quit. ive tried it and it sucks ass

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Raihana Abdul Jabbar 11 October 2008

Agreeing with Daffodil....very realistic....

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Dee Daffodil 07 October 2008

Wow! ! This was a gritty and amazingly honest depiction of what happens when someone withdraws from heroine addiction. Very well written...very graphic. Hugs, dee

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 September 2008

O a long poem on turkey. An experience on cold turkey is touchy. Love to add 10.

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Sule Last 17 September 2008

what is turkey? country? turkey is wonderful, countryin the world

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~ Jon London ~ 12 May 2008

An amazing portrait of an illness (we call addiction) remarkable insight into the suffering caused by such a body and mind altering change..brilliant work! ! ! ! 10. Best wishes, stay strong Jon

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Dan Ecklor 12 May 2008

Dude, ive been there more times than i'd like to admit. but one more thing we have in common is ' do it for mom' she's always been there

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David Desantis 09 May 2008

very powerful dude, what a horrible addiction. have you heard the lennon tune 'cold turkey'

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Straight 2 The Point 29 April 2008

Great poem. sounds like you took the exact opposite approach on drugs than my poem did, although it sounds like you were much deeper than I will ever be. thanks for writing

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Malini Kadir 11 April 2008

REAL BEAUTY OF A WRITE.......THE AGONY OF WITHDRAWAL BEAUTIFULLY OVERCOME FOR MUM! ...... It is not lack of temptation that makes man a stronger human being but the dip in and the strength to walk out...... It makes him a complete man!

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Rani Turton 25 March 2008

All the agony of withdrawal...written with courage and strength. Keep going strong, Sulaiman.

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Jasmine Margetson 24 March 2008

sounds excruciating..i felt your pain and agony and distress..at least u found away to deal without..congrats..i loved it...it speaks with a powerful voice..echoing and resounding..

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Vilma Xelin 19 March 2008

Oh God! very stronger feelings and words... too heavy for read just once! Congrats for penning, I loved it!

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Katherine Wiley 11 March 2008

yusof-A very good poem, strong and deep. You are a good poet. kat

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Sandra Fowler 10 March 2008

Very powerful and evocative. Wishing you better and brighter days ahead. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Keyra King 08 March 2008

cool poem great detail

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Linda Hepner 08 March 2008

Extraordinary how you have recorded your terrible experience in poetic form. From this and other poems I think you pierce the fog of poesie and come out real.

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 05 March 2008

This poem is wonderful and so personal...U shared this story about going cold turkey so well! Even the imagery you strung through this poem has me tired and feeling the heat and the cold the next minute.((Smile)) If this story is about you Sulaiman, I congratulate you on your Courage to share with your readers...and I will pray for the person in this poem to stay strong, Bold and have Courage against this enemy called Heroin....Keep reaching out for God and your familys hand. Take care of U.... Shelley

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Janri Gogeshvili 03 March 2008

Yes, it is necessary to win … And desires is sincere to tell «about it», the guarantor of that … I wish good luck …

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Bonnie Collins 01 March 2008

But you got through it, and pray you will stay day by day hour by hour.... Very intence writting on a very emotional subject...... Drugs can and will destroy the best of homes and usually the mother feels the worst........... Bonnie Collins

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