I woke up next morning crimping
Distraught and dejected
Body aching everywhere
I got no zest left
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Wow! ! This was a gritty and amazingly honest depiction of what happens when someone withdraws from heroine addiction. Very well written...very graphic. Hugs, dee
O a long poem on turkey. An experience on cold turkey is touchy. Love to add 10.
what is turkey? country? turkey is wonderful, countryin the world
An amazing portrait of an illness (we call addiction) remarkable insight into the suffering caused by such a body and mind altering change..brilliant work! ! ! ! 10. Best wishes, stay strong Jon
Dude, ive been there more times than i'd like to admit. but one more thing we have in common is ' do it for mom' she's always been there
very powerful dude, what a horrible addiction. have you heard the lennon tune 'cold turkey'
Great poem. sounds like you took the exact opposite approach on drugs than my poem did, although it sounds like you were much deeper than I will ever be. thanks for writing
REAL BEAUTY OF A WRITE.......THE AGONY OF WITHDRAWAL BEAUTIFULLY OVERCOME FOR MUM! ...... It is not lack of temptation that makes man a stronger human being but the dip in and the strength to walk out...... It makes him a complete man!
All the agony of withdrawal...written with courage and strength. Keep going strong, Sulaiman.
sounds excruciating..i felt your pain and agony and distress..at least u found away to deal without..congrats..i loved it...it speaks with a powerful voice..echoing and resounding..
Oh God! very stronger feelings and words... too heavy for read just once! Congrats for penning, I loved it!
yusof-A very good poem, strong and deep. You are a good poet. kat
Very powerful and evocative. Wishing you better and brighter days ahead. Warmest regards, Sandra
Extraordinary how you have recorded your terrible experience in poetic form. From this and other poems I think you pierce the fog of poesie and come out real.
This poem is wonderful and so personal...U shared this story about going cold turkey so well! Even the imagery you strung through this poem has me tired and feeling the heat and the cold the next minute.((Smile)) If this story is about you Sulaiman, I congratulate you on your Courage to share with your readers...and I will pray for the person in this poem to stay strong, Bold and have Courage against this enemy called Heroin....Keep reaching out for God and your familys hand. Take care of U.... Shelley
Yes, it is necessary to win … And desires is sincere to tell «about it», the guarantor of that … I wish good luck …
But you got through it, and pray you will stay day by day hour by hour.... Very intence writting on a very emotional subject...... Drugs can and will destroy the best of homes and usually the mother feels the worst........... Bonnie Collins
im happy for you that you quit. ive tried it and it sucks ass