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With clarity of mind, I relate.

Simple and effective! Yes 'blood is our bond'!

i had to study wilfred owen's poetry also for school, some of his others though. i liked how you brought the two soldiers together jerry, it made it out as a very emotional and engaging poem.

Such a complex idea delivered with such simplicity and such emotional force. Less certainly is more. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Love the Wilfred Owen quote (I studied him for History this year, interesting life) . Its both interesting and sad that calling for mother is often the last words on a soldier's lips. Atmospheric poem. Lauren

J. Read. Loved. On board. t x