Tuesday, November 15, 2005

Cold Sky Comments

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Cold sky,
Scudded clouds
Constant grind
Of broken crowds
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sal carter
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Mary Naylor 04 February 2006

The imagery is vivid and imaginative. I felt like I was floating above, looking down at a scene - somehow the words, 'the lonely crowd' come to my mind.' Nice alliteration in the first stanza.

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reigate, surrey, england
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