Saturday, May 16, 2009

Cold River Comments

Rating: 5.0

She wraps me in her icy flow

and chills me 'til I'm warm
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James Timothy Jarrett
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Fay Slimm 17 May 2009

'Chills me til I'm warm ' is a poetic inspiration Jim - - and the piece evokes an adventure in which with the river personified gives the reader a whole new sense of what a dip in a minor river could result in - - a fine contribution Jim....10 from Fay.

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