I woke up this morning
in a driving snow,
found it time to get up
my get up and go -
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faved it too--so I might return and read it time after time
there is so much about the human condition in this unpretentious poem---that might be indeed the hallmark of much of your poetry--it says so much in such a human way---top top top marks
This poem, so easy to read and like. So sincere and natural that gives it that unforgettable interest and poetic might. A true pleasure. Thank you!
Looking at line 4, get up and go.. My 'get-up-and-go' already got up and went.
You have a Hank Williams song title somewhere in your poem. Can you see it?
Great poem, Smoky. I hope you find your way out of the snowstorm soon!