Wednesday, November 30, 2022

Cold Love Blues Comments

Rating: 5.0

I woke up this morning
in a driving snow,
found it time to get up
my get up and go -
...
Read full text

Smoky Hoss
COMMENTS
Kim Barney 08 February 2023

Great poem, Smoky. I hope you find your way out of the snowstorm soon!

0 0 Reply
Susan Williams 08 February 2023

faved it too--so I might return and read it time after time

0 0 Reply
Susan Williams 08 February 2023

there is so much about the human condition in this unpretentious poem---that might be indeed the hallmark of much of your poetry--it says so much in such a human way---top top top marks

1 0 Reply
Sandra Feldman 30 November 2022

This poem, so easy to read and like. So sincere and natural that gives it that unforgettable interest and poetic might. A true pleasure. Thank you!

2 0 Reply
LeeAnn Azzopardi 30 November 2022

Smoky excellent piece Top 5 Bravo!

1 0 Reply
Cowboy Ron Williams 30 November 2022

Looking at line 4, get up and go.. My 'get-up-and-go' already got up and went.

2 0 Reply
Cowboy Ron Williams 30 November 2022

You have a Hank Williams song title somewhere in your poem. Can you see it?

1 0 Reply
Cowboy Ron Williams 30 November 2022

I really like this and have given it five stars.

2 0 Reply
Smoky Hoss

Smoky Hoss

U.S.A.
Close
Error Success