Wednesday, April 19, 2006

Cold Lights Comments

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Lining up on the way to the subway
I pass crowds of thousands of faces
Each one unique, each one rare
And as cold as the glaciers and the cruel North Wind
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Eden Sheffroth
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Padraic O' Reilly 19 April 2006

Eden, you're finest work yet. Lots of really good language and feeling. Keep up the good work, you're awesome.

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Veronika Knollman 19 April 2006

Good poem.

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Brian Dorn 19 April 2006

Nice poem Eden! You've certainly captured the essence of city life... nice job! Brian

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Eden Sheffroth

Eden Sheffroth

Brantford, Ontario
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