Monday, November 10, 2008

Cold Heart In His Hands Comments

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There's a man who stands with a cold heart in his hands...
Leaves for a preview of the latest attraction
Attraction of the dark stinging feel that we named pain
He has the saddest truth of false healing...
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Drake Kinkaid
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Some of the verses you used were so fantastic. phe·nom·e·nal poem!

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*Trusting You* 10 November 2008

very good Drake. Maybe he'll make some peace if he's handed another tomorrow.. great line good job. *Purkey Girl*

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C T Heart 10 November 2008

nice free verse with few rhyming pattern, the theme was well penned...keep on writing.

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