Wednesday, March 25, 2009

Cold Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart stops beating,
My breath clogs in my throat,
When she touches you,
Like you have always been hers to hold.
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Ridah Ellahi
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Ridah this is awesome :) melange of youthful zest imbued in age old acid of yearnings

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Scuba Steve 01 April 2009

an absolute grip of passion, your heart is in love's grip, he may feel a tug.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 25 March 2009

A passionate well written poem on lost but longing love. This love, if true, will return! If not...keep on writing. You are talented. Nice work. I enjoyed reading it.

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Ridah Ellahi

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