She will never ever
Let Cupid prick her heart again
For love had put her
To heaven and hell.
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Sad reality in love story it makes someone else heart as cold as an ice. Nice poem po :)
The cold heart remains the same. Time will be the best remedy that is called forgetting only the heart that he knows he loves.
I feel heart will let cupid fly through without being stuck again to trouble. Great poem 10+++
Let Cupid her heart again For love had put her To heaven and......so touching and impressive. Really it is a lovely poem.
Cold heart is always at risk, Still you have written a poem on it, Well done, thanks for sharing
Rose Marie, i'm 'borrowing' this poem for my (our) August showcase. have your lawyers contact my lawyers if this is not to your liking! ! ! Thanks. bri :)
Love has the power of taking you to the high and pull you down into an abyss. Short and to the point. Very nice.
Sometimes love puts one to heaven in the begining but it ends in a. Such a one is annoyed by deception in love but love can hit him/her again at anytime.
you capitalize Cupid, but not Heaven and; maybe it is because you are speaking not of the places i was taught to believe in, .....[in church and Sunday School (and no longer do) ].... but just of extreme states of emotional euphoria and emotional agony. i could have used this in July's showcase as a poem about love. but now i'll plan to use it in August's showcase as one of the SHORT poems by PH friends, like YOU! AND to MyPoemList. bri :)
There is very few things on earth that can make a person feel lower than dirt than love that is rejected, humiliated, or merely simulated. Your words conveyed this very concisely. Well done.10++++++
A poem of a real feeling....short yet profound....thank you Rose 10++
We have heard many tales about Cupid....! You have altogether presented a different tale! A wonderful poem dear Rose! Loved reading it.....(10)
Such a perfect picture of a cold heart, ate Rose.....10+++++
She will never ever let Cupid her heart again. Brilliant!
Without love life is ad when love is there this builds heaven. Love brings amazing thought even from emptiness. A brilliant and thoughtful poem is wisely penned...10
To heaven and......very significant. Thank u.anjandev roy.