Tuesday, July 24, 2018

Cold Heart Comments

Rating: 4.8

She will never ever
Let Cupid prick her heart again
For love had put her
To heaven and hell.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Anjandev Roy 04 August 2019

To heaven and......very significant. Thank u.anjandev roy.

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Celyfer dalire 22 April 2019

Sad reality in love story it makes someone else heart as cold as an ice. Nice poem po :)

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Jankovic Zoran 23 February 2019

The cold heart remains the same. Time will be the best remedy that is called forgetting only the heart that he knows he loves.

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M Asim Nehal 25 January 2019

I feel heart will let cupid fly through without being stuck again to trouble. Great poem 10+++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 September 2018

Let Cupid her heart again For love had put her To heaven and......so touching and impressive. Really it is a lovely poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 03 September 2018

A cold heart is always very careful.

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Muzahidul Reza 26 August 2018

Cold heart is always at risk, Still you have written a poem on it, Well done, thanks for sharing

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Crayon Poet 14 August 2018

Oh but he's a sniper, that dirty Cupid!

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 August 2018

The pains of love and life! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Bri Edwards 28 July 2018

Rose Marie, i'm 'borrowing' this poem for my (our) August showcase. have your lawyers contact my lawyers if this is not to your liking! ! ! Thanks. bri :)

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 July 2018

Love has the power of taking you to the high and pull you down into an abyss. Short and to the point. Very nice.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 July 2018

Sometimes love puts one to heaven in the begining but it ends in a. Such a one is annoyed by deception in love but love can hit him/her again at anytime.

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Bri Edwards 25 July 2018

p.s. i 'love' the title. :)

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Bri Edwards 25 July 2018

you capitalize Cupid, but not Heaven and; maybe it is because you are speaking not of the places i was taught to believe in, .....[in church and Sunday School (and no longer do) ].... but just of extreme states of emotional euphoria and emotional agony. i could have used this in July's showcase as a poem about love. but now i'll plan to use it in August's showcase as one of the SHORT poems by PH friends, like YOU! AND to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Susan Williams 25 July 2018

There is very few things on earth that can make a person feel lower than dirt than love that is rejected, humiliated, or merely simulated. Your words conveyed this very concisely. Well done.10++++++

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Indira Renganathan 25 July 2018

A poem of a real feeling....short yet profound....thank you Rose 10++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 July 2018

We have heard many tales about Cupid....! You have altogether presented a different tale! A wonderful poem dear Rose! Loved reading it.....(10)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 July 2018

Such a perfect picture of a cold heart, ate Rose.....10+++++

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She will never ever let Cupid her heart again. Brilliant!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 July 2018

Without love life is ad when love is there this builds heaven. Love brings amazing thought even from emptiness. A brilliant and thoughtful poem is wisely penned...10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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