Sunday, July 29, 2012

Cold Feet And Other Objects..... Comments

Rating: 4.7

Huddled within a blanket
In a camping chair
Thats not quite right
Blinds down to shade the sleeping
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Karen Sinclair 16 March 2013

Lol it's all true. Unbelievably

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Owain Glyn 16 March 2013

I'll not try to figure out the bits that are true, it's very funny.

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Smoky Hoss 16 October 2012

True, or not so true, it IS truly funny!

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Yash Shinde 15 October 2012

you are so clever, , , , , how do you get such topics to right you are so brilliant.....you think so much you put so much efforts, karen love your poems than of anyone else so lovely, so beautiful.............great idea.....so openmindinded u are..........your thinking reaches the heights of skies and also the depths of grounds what a lovely work so great poems...............10/10 on every poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! only few can write such poems......you are god gifted really........you were on poem hunter for so long but I never read your poems.but today I am overjoyed.......lovely................................................ love you dear..........: -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -)

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John Brown 02 October 2012

This one tickled me Karen. Well written.

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Valerie Dohren 12 August 2012

It's always so cold here in GB and with soaring costs of energy who can afford to put up the heating, and that cold toilet seat brrrrrrrrrrrrr! ! Love this write Karen, and so very amusing.

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Juan Olivarez 07 August 2012

makes me glad I live in south Texas where toilet seats are always warm, if not outright hot. great poem.

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Joseph Anderson 06 August 2012

A ribald romp to the privy and then the seat was icy.Delightfully funny to me, maybe not so for you

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Simon Odhiambo 06 August 2012

You made me laugh...in the office. If you think the toilet seat is cold, try the x-ray plate. A well written poem.

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Danny Draper 01 August 2012

The use of repetition 'dear' in an accusing or scolding or resolute and bedraggled manner adds distinctly to the narrators displeasure. The frank need to pee and dread turned to victory and pleasurable comfort brought the piece nicely to its conclusion while the last line brilliant and humorously proves, you cannot have it all. Ah to dream. Reminds me of Liza Doolittle and her desires for security as creature comforts.

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Chuck Audette 31 July 2012

Haha! Fun one! They should make a memory foam toilet seat. -c

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