Cold Diamond Edge Comments

Cool and touchy composition 10

A very fine set for a plot: Split at Stonehenge, an interesting tale by our beloved Onelia, a true lady.

this is your best poem that i have read so far... it's so simple yet at the same time very complex. The emotion really comes through. Also, the coldness and loneliness is very prevelant. Excellent job as always Onelia.

My baby of rough is back! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Yay... tis a cutting bite of the rich of much... sparkle to big bangs edge... aroha xx

I marvel at your ability to put so much into a short poem like this. Excellent. H