Sunday, June 20, 2010

Cold Dead Eyes Comments

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I'll have you know that I've been searching my room
for the love we lost atop of the sheets
between the pages of a bible
forced under the weight of pathetic defeat
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Violet Warren
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Lynn Glover 20 June 2010

Beautifully written with the most important part, good rhyming. the poem its self tells ages about your maturity. Keep up the good work. Lynn

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