Monday, September 7, 2009

Cold Days Comments

Rating: 5.0

It is spring.
Daffodils erupt from snow-clouded earth,
Their yellow brightness brighter
Than the warming orb of sun
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Bob Bowers
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Ben Gieske 11 October 2009

Very appealing to all the senses. The last stanza provides a lot to think about. It lingers in my mind.

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Lillian Thomas 09 October 2009

good images, it's a strong poem.

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Patrick McFarland 07 September 2009

Very nice Bob. Beautiful imagery that defines New England in the Spring time. 10

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