Cold Angel Poem by Lodigiana Poetess

Cold Angel



She tasted like a winter morning, sharp, cold unyielding,
yet he kissed her still.
Eyes crystal clear, her gaze penetrated his lonely soul,
he surrendered to it,
catching a glimpse of a smile half etched in that perfect face,
his hand clasped hers.
Words cascading through his befuddled mind
yet only a silent tortured sigh escaped..
‘Save me save me someone, anyone'
but the silence cried, without a scream.
How had she found him so easily? ..
a countenance that unmistakably said ‘I'm lonely'
Unprotected he became prey to her parasitic hold.
He ached to be needed.
She needed his fear.
This child of the damned.
Her ice would not melt, his heart though..would
and still...he kissed her....

Cold Angel
Thursday, August 1, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: coldness,dark,deceit,emotions,falsehood,heart,loneliness,love,victim
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Love or obsession can sometimes blind us to love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lodigiana 29 August 2019

Sometimes when we write we fall into a pattern of keeping things nice and light and uncomplicated because we think that anything darker and more complex might confound, confuse or complicate our enjoyment of reading it..but the dark sometimes DOES need to come out…. and I am so pleased that you enjoyed reading it and really value and appreciate your positive comments- Thank you so much. Lodigiana x

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Shaun Cronick 29 August 2019

Deliciously dark and wicked so beautifully written. I relish and revel in a good dark poem. And this is more than good Elizabeth it's a bad habit that you can't resist. Temptation of the purest form. Thank you for sharing this.10+++ and added to my fathomless black dark poem chest. And added you to my favourite poets list. Thanks again.

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Lodigiana Poetess 29 August 2019

Sometimes when we write we fall into a pattern of keeping things nice and light and uncomplicated because we think that anything darker and more complex might confound, confuse or complicate our enjoyment of reading it..but the dark sometimes DOES need to come out…. and I am so pleased that you enjoyed reading it and really value and appreciate your positive comments- Thank you so much. Lodigiana x

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Jane Campion 01 August 2019

A poem that chills the air.

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Lodigiana Poetess 02 August 2019

Your comments are spot on! thank you so much for reading them..I do appreciate it.

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