Wednesday, April 15, 2009

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CoreyLeigh Mason 28 April 2009

Na. na. na! I'm glad this one was the one we put in the magazine. I really liked this one. ♥ Still do! ♥

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Debra Kemper 16 April 2009

I'm surprised all your poems are prose poems. A few of them might be more effective in regular free verse format. :)

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SAM Mitsuki 15 April 2009

Its cute^~. I like the rhyme that is at the beginning! It flows really well.

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Leslie Neiwert

Leslie Neiwert

Sacramento, CA
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