Saturday, July 7, 2012

Cold Comments

Rating: 4.9

When I wake up cold and empty.
After all the good within me.
Slowly drains out of a hole and I can't cry.
I try to speak and all at once I find.
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Mark Normand
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Chris Zachariou 09 August 2014

Wonderful poem exploring the depths of loneliness.

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Scott Szary 07 July 2012

Very good poem. I is uniquely written and carries a very deep meaning.

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Sawan Dhyani 07 July 2012

Nice poem Mark. Good. I like it.

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