Sunday, December 2, 2007

Coitus Non Interruptus Comments

Rating: ★5.0

As Mom and Dad play loves game.
The baby stirs uneasily.
just as the crashing climax came.
The baby settles quietly.
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
baby mom parents Dad
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Fay Slimm 10 October 2008

Ivor a very intimate picture of family life moving on in it's concerns despite baby - a very real and beautifully depicted scene.

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Thad Wilk 02 December 2007

Hi Ivor! Babies do tend to sometimes pick the wrong moment to cry! Nice write! ! ! ! Thad *10*! !

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ivor or ivor.e hogg

ivor or ivor.e hogg

Hebburn.Co Durham U.K
ivor or ivor.e hogg
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Hebburn.Co Durham U.K
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