Thursday, August 18, 2005

Coincidence Comments

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Another strange coincidence
said George while sitting on the fence.
He sat there, dreaming on most days
and watched the heteros and gays
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Pradeep Dhavakumar 18 August 2005

Very good poem Herbert. I coudn't notice the rhyme till the very end. It flowed very well. Nice subject and well written. Thank you.

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Raynette Eitel 18 August 2005

Wouldn't you think people would get uncomfortable sitting on the fence for years? Good poem, Herbert. Raynette

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 18 August 2005

Intense and straight to the point.

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Kelly Allen Vinal 18 August 2005

Raw, good, and.... No pretense: -)

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