Since I was cognizant about Life and Living
My contemplations took all spins and leap
Deeds took a long haul of transformations
Introspection took me to great serenity
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very nice you have protrayed all the characteristics of being a good human being so well
Vidi, you have described the traits that make for a life worth living. Yours is a very valuable poem for the reader. Thank you sincerely.
the last para extracts the whole juice of verse... it's rather good enought to convey a thought provoking and inspiring vision. thanks n rgrds for sharing/salu