Saturday, November 28, 2015

Cognizance/Awareness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Creeping for eternity
On a banana leaf
I was but
A glum caterpillar.
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Dutendra Chamling
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Pamela Sinicrope 05 March 2017

Nice micro poem. A metamorphosis exacted on the heart. Thanks for sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 10 February 2017

Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. Lovely poem nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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Norah Tunney 17 March 2016

I love this poem! What a beautiful image

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 January 2016

The colours of the world! With the muse of nature. Nice work.

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Chuy Amante 12 December 2015

touch us all god and help us to see that touch and then be free to experience! thanks for the translation

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Kim Barney 11 December 2015

What a wonderful thing to think that a touch from a person could turn a caterpillar into a butterfly! Probably no one else ever would have thought of that. Well done!

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Dutendra Chamling 14 December 2015

Kim Barney! Thank you so much.

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Manonton Dalan 03 December 2015

I love nature poem..this could be a person too, , , great

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Dutendra Chamling 05 December 2015

Manomonton Dalan! Thank you so much.

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Valsa George 29 November 2015

The growth from a caterpillar to a butterfly through a loving touch is beautifully summed up in limited words! Enjoyed reading your poem Dutendra!

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Dutendra Chamling 30 November 2015

Valsa George! Thank you so much for an enormous compliment.

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 November 2015

Beautifully written. Thanks for posting.

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Dutendra Chamling 29 November 2015

Anil Kumar Panda! Thanks!

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Dutendra Chamling

Dutendra Chamling

Khotang, Nepal
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