Tuesday, February 10, 2015

Cogitating Comments

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Racing through melodies and their rhythms, finding all
sorts of ideas and thoughts cogitating therein.

Collecting them into meanings and definitions, focusing
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 11 February 2015

Two outstanding elements of this poem: First, in the Third stanza you affirm the value of the DAILINESS OF LIFE which I realize is one of my shortcomings. I live for the Big Moments, the Peak Experiences, instead of finding satisfaction in what is given as you show in ordinary terms. In the last stanza you make a plea for peace, which can only happen when we understand and accept each other. We are so far from that as a Planetary Society, but poets will beat their crazy heads against the sky rather than give up H-O-P-E.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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