Coffin Speaks Comments

A master piece! I don't find a stanza where I have not been stuck to reflect your expression! I liked the third stanza most! I vote this commendable piece of poetry with a 10

Thought provoking and well crafted poem Amar Death has fascinated me since my youth I see it as the ultimate adventure, in the meantime I want to live every moment as if it were my last 10 points

I shall embrace your tired bones Withered by rigours of hell To reach the heights of heaven Where you 'll happily dwell- - - -Death does us a favour by freeing us from the pains of human body.A marvelous portrayal of Death in a positive light.

Good effort..the final line is the best...it's sage to sever ties. Keep writing

A poem with a profound message in the form of an onlooker's view on death, which highlights a plain truth that every being has to face in the material world - Shall let you return to dust, For all that you are worth. Quite enlightening. Congratulations for being the poem of the day.

Great poem and great imagery. Congratulations for member poem of the day.

congrats my friend, a well deserved poem of the day thanks Amar

death is at once destroyer and creator of life. through death we enter the gate of heaven. so death is not something to be feared. great write. congrats for being the poet of the day!

Poem of the da, y it really deserves to be here. Thank you Amar

nice poem; congrats on being poet of the day!

The ultimate doom of all life expressed with great depth.A good write.Thanks

Brilliant poem. So much depth. You have written with so much ease on the most difficult theme. A pleasure to read.

Long stolen! ! Death is part of us. Thanks for sharing.

A profound poem, dear Amar. I hope to see more from you. Congratulations on poem of the day!

Very well done, Amar. Congratulations for having it chosen as poem of the day!

I harbor shadows that are dark They will soothe your tired eyes, Know sweet air was never yours It´s sage to sever ties. great imagination, buried inside, lying inside the coffin you meditate on life and death. thank you dear poet for this great poem. tony

Remnants of life is beneath the soil. Rooted, buried, submerged in the wrath of time. Your poetry cast death as a cosy suberb for mortals to rest till infinity. Loved every word.

This is also very beautifully penned. By looking at the death as a passionate turning point in one's life is something brave and very much philosophical. I would like to treat you as a philosophical writer having beautiful ideas in mind. It is a valuable saying in one of the greatest holy books in human civilization that; At your birth you come to this world crying While you are crying the others smile, At your death you leave this world smiling While you are smiling the orhers crying Thank you for sharing.

Death is the result of having lived our lives, everything we've learned and experienced ends when we no longer live. What is the moment between life and death filled with, how does it take us from our lives on earth and where does it send us. Your poem brings up many questions of death, but there are no answers in life. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

Death is part of us; as we journey on this earth. Nice work.