All around its greed
More more more I need
If I have one I need more
I am not satisfied anymore
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The cycle of need-greed-feed is addictive and ultimately becomes the sole goal in itself. This is true of drug addicts too.
hiiee.. its so very true....i m sure even u'll agree that....all that u've written is actully the way all of us are.... nice poem.
very beautiful poem with a good message and the smooth flow of words make it more powerful also...
apt poem for the present generation.u' ve depicted the pathetic condition of man...who is never ever satisfied..who always want more...more..and more... nice poem jinu...
this is essentially the condition of modern man...overambitious, greedy, materialistic...we forget that the shroud has no pockets sewn on top! ! ! nice write, Jibin... Asma...
hi jibin, this poem is true mirror of todays life nicely written pradnya