Thursday, July 30, 2009

Coffin Builder Comments

Rating: ★4.5

Empty inside, Instant demise
A blacken heart; a tainted soul
Every day a fight for more gold.
Building a legacy out of sticks and stones
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Ashley Mejia
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Autumn Jones 05 August 2009

This is good. I like how the words flow and the repetition of some words but with their different ideas being used. Good write. Keep it up. I give it a 9.

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Ashley Mejia

Ashley Mejia

Puerto Rico
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Puerto Rico
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