Friday, July 24, 2009

Coffeehouse Bar Stewardess Comments

Rating: 5.0

She blooms in the morning like a coffee flower.
I like that rare flavor and I peep there frequently.
I sit on a bar stool and wait for her to bring my elixir.
When I sip that with a straw I feel like getting more courage
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 28 July 2009

This is a charming poem, Nimal. I know how important coffee is and how devastating is its loss. Your coffeehouse bar stewardess sounds comely and worthy your love. Pity she has disappeared and with her, all your joy. Your first line sets off the poem to perfection. The rest follows easily and enchantingly. Definitely one of your best. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 25 July 2009

If only life could be filled with happily ever afters. A bittersweet poem, Nimal. As always, Sandra

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