Sunday, April 7, 2019

Coffee Of Stars Comments

Rating: 4.7

Her moon is the everlasting cream
In my coffee of stars.
I stir in the hopes she appears
In half dark twinkles of night.
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Kewayne Wadley
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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 August 2021

Amazing metaphored poem, ah your addiction to coffee wonderfully put in poetic format, so impressingly done! 5 Stars full for this wonderful poem

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Practicing Poetess 19 April 2020

An amazingly creative poem, fittingly chosen as Member P.O.D. Congratulations to you for authoring this 'pen gem' !

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Bernard Snyder 19 April 2020

Wow. Quite impressive. Good to see it being chosen as 'POD'. Congrats, and well deserved.

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Lyn Paul 19 April 2020

A great combination brought together. Coffee is like a powerhouse that so many could not live without.

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Anil Kumar Panda 19 April 2020

Lovely poem on coffee and love. Hope you have a sweet morning with a hot cup of coffee and your love besides you. Like to read again and again. Thanks for sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 19 April 2020

A free flight of creativity on winged imagination. An insightful love poem from the heart.

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Harley White 19 April 2020

A lovely poem with an original metaphor and fresh imagery... congratulations on poem of the day...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 April 2020

Her moon is the everlasting cream In my coffee of stars. I stir in the hopes she appears In half dark twinkles of night.... fantastic beginning. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being chosen this poem as the member poem of the poem of the day.

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Mahtab Bangalee 19 April 2020

I stir until half dark twinkles are covered. I stir until only the smallest bit is shown. Her moon the everlasting cream, In my coffee of stars...//beautiful poem penned. congrats

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 April 2020

I stir until half dark twinkles are covered. I stir until only the smallest bit is shown. Her moon the everlasting cream, In my coffee of stars. beautiful and very clear expressions.. dear poet. thank you. tony

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Jennifer Birchall 19 April 2019

Coffee and love, perfect combination. Wonderful poem Kewayne.

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Kevin Patrick 19 April 2019

You had me right at the opening lines, hook flow and hypnotizing sinker, the language was seductively effusive and bewitching. Coffee is not by celestial paramour, but you make it sound inviting. I don't know if its a metaphor for a girl, or literal obsession for caffeinated confection, but its brilliant. Well deserve as Poem of the day!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 April 2019

A marvelous poem of the day, Kewayne. Congrats for being chosen....10++++++++++

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Julia Luber 19 April 2019

Beautiful poem about one's addiction and love for coffee finding a true origin in real romantic love- the cream like an obsession, the stirring like anticipating great love. Excellent imagery and expression and very close to what we know best- our daily lives and the coffee we wake up to!

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Bernard Snyder 19 April 2019

Mr.Wadley, this poem definitely left a sense of delight to my tummy! Fascinating write. Reading this poem had my imagination bursting with intrigue. Congrats on it being chosen as 'POD'. Well-deserved.

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Her moon the everlasting cream, In my coffee of stars. Profound image. Congrats

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Manpreet Singh 19 April 2019

The mingling of two images is so perfect. Wonderful poem.

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Savita Tyagi 19 April 2019

Very interesting write. Smooth and rejuvenating as cream on coffee. Congratulations on such a heartwarming poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 April 2019

Warm in the bristo! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Matthew Holloway 19 April 2019

I'll have a cup of what you're having please, a delicious sounding poem

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Kewayne Wadley

Kewayne Wadley

Groton, Connecticutt
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