Her moon is the everlasting cream
In my coffee of stars.
I stir in the hopes she appears
In half dark twinkles of night.
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An amazingly creative poem, fittingly chosen as Member P.O.D. Congratulations to you for authoring this 'pen gem' !
Wow. Quite impressive. Good to see it being chosen as 'POD'. Congrats, and well deserved.
A great combination brought together. Coffee is like a powerhouse that so many could not live without.
Lovely poem on coffee and love. Hope you have a sweet morning with a hot cup of coffee and your love besides you. Like to read again and again. Thanks for sharing.
A free flight of creativity on winged imagination. An insightful love poem from the heart.
A lovely poem with an original metaphor and fresh imagery... congratulations on poem of the day...
Her moon is the everlasting cream In my coffee of stars. I stir in the hopes she appears In half dark twinkles of night.... fantastic beginning. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being chosen this poem as the member poem of the poem of the day.
I stir until half dark twinkles are covered. I stir until only the smallest bit is shown. Her moon the everlasting cream, In my coffee of stars...//beautiful poem penned. congrats
I stir until half dark twinkles are covered. I stir until only the smallest bit is shown. Her moon the everlasting cream, In my coffee of stars. beautiful and very clear expressions.. dear poet. thank you. tony
Coffee and love, perfect combination. Wonderful poem Kewayne.
You had me right at the opening lines, hook flow and hypnotizing sinker, the language was seductively effusive and bewitching. Coffee is not by celestial paramour, but you make it sound inviting. I don't know if its a metaphor for a girl, or literal obsession for caffeinated confection, but its brilliant. Well deserve as Poem of the day!
A marvelous poem of the day, Kewayne. Congrats for being chosen....10++++++++++
Beautiful poem about one's addiction and love for coffee finding a true origin in real romantic love- the cream like an obsession, the stirring like anticipating great love. Excellent imagery and expression and very close to what we know best- our daily lives and the coffee we wake up to!
Mr.Wadley, this poem definitely left a sense of delight to my tummy! Fascinating write. Reading this poem had my imagination bursting with intrigue. Congrats on it being chosen as 'POD'. Well-deserved.
Her moon the everlasting cream, In my coffee of stars. Profound image. Congrats
Very interesting write. Smooth and rejuvenating as cream on coffee. Congratulations on such a heartwarming poem.
Warm in the bristo! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I'll have a cup of what you're having please, a delicious sounding poem
Amazing metaphored poem, ah your addiction to coffee wonderfully put in poetic format, so impressingly done! 5 Stars full for this wonderful poem