Tuesday, April 26, 2016

Coffee Is Waiting Comments

Rating: 5.0

Coffee is waiting
Hot, yet we're sipping
Coffee waits, we're talking
Time's fast passing
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Paul Sebastian
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Bharati Nayak 27 April 2016

Subtle exchanges of feelings while coffee is waiting.A lovely poem thanks for sharing.

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Paul Sebastian 27 April 2016

There are lot of things that vibrate around us, but we tend not to notice. This is about an exchange bebbetween two people in love.

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 26 April 2016

Beautiful flow, real feel, longing, dream, souls unite to communicate, awesome poem perfect 10

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Paul Sebastian 27 April 2016

I am glad you liked the poem. Ever so often couple exchange moments but take such moments. Communication is the key to all relationship.

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Paul Sebastian 27 April 2016

I am glad you liked the poem. The young often take things for granted.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 26 April 2016

Marvelous catalyst manifested in the form of waiting coffee. Thanks for sharing a beautiful poem.10 points. Regards. Ratnakar Mandlik

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Paul Sebastian 27 April 2016

Coffee witnesses and waits on a couple who share their lives.

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Paul Sebastian 27 April 2016

Thank you for your appreciation and for afffirming me.

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