Wednesday, July 30, 2008

Coffee In Nero's Comments

Rating: 5.0

He and she
hand in hand
find a table in the window.
The sun slants in,
...
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Janice Windle
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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 September 2008

An interesting beautiful piece.

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Chitralekha Chetia 26 August 2008

Makes me smile. Very beautifully descriptive of a rather common situation. So often this happens with me too.... I am staring and eavesdropping. Couldn't have been put more beautifully and crisply. I am beginning to love you love poetry.

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Donall Dempsey 02 August 2008

How beautiful you are... in your seeing and what your mind elects to alight on and delight in...a perfect little movie...as the story unfolds and begins to begin. This is obviously not the beginning of the enn...rather it is...the end of the beginning. I love how and what you see...your awareness has such a deft and loving touch. love Donall Donall

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Roger Cornish 31 July 2008

Fantastic Jan! You seem revitalised! Its in every line Congratulations lady......... A big fat 10! ! ! ! ! ! ! Roger

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To add to Angie... what a lovely scene WE are watching. t xx

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