Monday, August 3, 2020

Coffee In Breaking Day Comments

Rating: 4.8

The last night light
slowly made dreamy the path

silent the wood was
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 August 2020

A great description of night life, then the next occurrence that break of the day with coffee, tea or something else. Excellently worded and captive rendered! A great poem! A 10+++++++

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Indira Renganathan 16 August 2020

An amusing poem quite tasty 10++

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Deepak S S 06 August 2020

Nice flow in your poem. Liked it.

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A.Nilabirdhwaja Singh 03 August 2020

A charming life the poet enjoys and loves.Very nicely penned.

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M Asim Nehal 03 August 2020

After a sound slumber When we awakit is as if a new life and a fresh day To begin our day with coffee, tea or immunity booster drink We start a fresh eating session. A great description about the night life followed by a day break refreshes one and all via your above poem.10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 03 August 2020

A well written poetic expression. Simply fascinating......10+++

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