Coffee In Breaking Day Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Coffee In Breaking Day

Rating: 4.8


The last night light
slowly made dreamy the path

silent the wood was
rhythmical breeze by the window glass

leaves into leaves womb
and the owl eyes

glittering the far sky breast
and ended the path of sleeping

knocking the door of love
the dawn sun comes to awake

before awaking the eyes fully
drowsy kiss drawing the day

on the pinch of bathing drops
kitchen greetings with the scent

sweet bitter in that sense of drinks
breaks the whole drama of couple blink


31.07.2020 Chattogram

Monday, August 3, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: day,drinking,first
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 03 August 2020

A well written poetic expression. Simply fascinating......10+++

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 August 2020

A great description of night life, then the next occurrence that break of the day with coffee, tea or something else. Excellently worded and captive rendered! A great poem! A 10+++++++

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Indira Renganathan 16 August 2020

An amusing poem quite tasty 10++

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Deepak S S 06 August 2020

Nice flow in your poem. Liked it.

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A.Nilabirdhwaja Singh 03 August 2020

A charming life the poet enjoys and loves.Very nicely penned.

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M Asim Nehal 03 August 2020

After a sound slumber When we awakit is as if a new life and a fresh day To begin our day with coffee, tea or immunity booster drink We start a fresh eating session. A great description about the night life followed by a day break refreshes one and all via your above poem.10

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