Sunday, September 4, 2011

Coffee Cup Comments

Rating: 4.8

I write my poems with my coffee cup
I smile as I write while the verses shape up
All the thoughts in my mind I write endlessly
For they flow nonstop as I sip my coffee
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Naida Nepascua Supnet
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 08 May 2015

Reading this after a few years makes me glad and laughing My coffee-cup remained faithful to me all these years As it accopanies me on things I do As I wait, again, till my husband comes home.

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Terry Craddock 04 May 2015

I write my poems with my coffee cup yes this line hooked me, I have written hundreds of poems this way, I loved the friendly intimate coffee cup conversation, you have an intriguing style of writing, will quietly read you a lot over the weekend when time is mine :)

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Allemagne Roßmann 08 September 2012

Coffee mug is caffinated and mixture of milk, water, brown unrefined sugar(Chinese i know like them) but in all it gave u the energy to write it.But this write will be a decaffinated one as it is going to live after your energy is conserved once you have finished up the last mark round of the coffee foments in life`s mug..Wonderful write.Coffee speeds up the heart.We all need our time to coffee.Inspiring flavour of poetry and i hope my puerile comment how this one add some cantuccini or cakes or biscuits to boost it up--i enjoyed Senhora..keep the good work up

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Iwrite Iam 31 July 2012

I wait for you with my coffee cup I will wait until my waiting is up When the day you get home what more can I say 'Kudos' coffee cup we made it...'hooray' For I realize I won't make it this far Without my coffee cup that stays near or far These lines sum it up for me. Very Very well put...

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Vijay Sai R 21 June 2012

i feel i too have a coffee cup in my hand...nice food for thought

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Miriam Maia Padua 28 October 2011

you have shared with us the aroma of coffee... very good description and rhymes in a smooth and lively flow.. thanks for sharing

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William King 13 September 2011

Its very descriptive. Your love for not only your coffee but your coffee cup is astounding.

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Unwritten Soul 13 September 2011

Sipping 'coffee cup' that you made for us really taste like refreshing, and even i like but not big fan of coffee but this poem really has it aroma :) Nice poem_Unwritten Soul

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Wang Qian 12 September 2011

very beautifully written...nice work! ! !

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Stefanie Fontker 09 September 2011

Your writing has a wonderful flow, something rare in poetry. Very beautiful, I hope you continue to write.

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Michael Oliver 08 September 2011

a serene self prortrait of the poet at work.The gentle idlings of the mind nurturing the idea into being.The importance of context all context not just the theme.Straight into 'my poems'

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Jo George 07 September 2011

What a lovely poem. Most of us sip coffee everyday but seldom thinks about it as u thought. Great imagery and lines. loved reading your poem.

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Ken E Hall 05 September 2011

Delightful poem on the coffee cup a drink we all love to sip, and it seems to hold the poem as you write we can smell the coffee...great...regards

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Joseph Juarez 04 September 2011

haha i love this poem great set up and detail... i love coffee to and its always with me at work i never thought about it as something as friend by myside til this because when i do forget my coffee all i think about is getting my cup i love this poem

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Jim Troy 04 September 2011

I too salute that coffee cup for it has brought the world Naida, and the world needs this lady a lot. Such a wonderful picture you paint for us to enjoy, watching different beautiful events in a precious life with your friend the coffee cup. I love this poem.... you are up and running.... Jim Troy

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

Naida Nepascua Supnet

bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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