Wednesday, October 14, 2015

Coffee Comments

Rating: 5.0

Knowing here the caffeine's presence
I am addicted to it's flavour and essence
It's aroma and taste alienates my continence
Activates my relaxed nerves in opulence..
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Lopamudra Mishra
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Dr Antony Theodore 02 May 2017

Consciously energizing with a new vigour and credence Acts a tranquilizer to me, , But I contravene to taste and Enjoy every sip... While listening music and enjoying nature's inn.. Very fine description giving us a sense of your feeling with a tune and a music of your owne. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 October 2016

Hi Ms Mishra, A really beautiful poem apparently on coffee. But your phrase NATURE'S INN transforms the poem into a poem the bounties of nature. Really enticing phrase, very innovative: these two words take the poem to a new level. Congrats.10++

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 February 2016

It's all about its flavour and essence. Thanks for sharing.

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Souren Mondal 14 October 2015

Much like the music the speaker of the poem listens to the poem itself has a musical quality with words used in a nice manner.. A fine write..

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Lopamudra Mishra 25 October 2015

Thank you so much for sparing ur time to go through my poem...

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Lopamudra Mishra 25 October 2015

Thanks, so much for liking my poem and for your precious words.

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Lopamudra Mishra 25 October 2015

Thanks, so much.Will always wait for your encouraging words..

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Rajnish Manga 14 October 2015

Such is the joy of reading this poem that a reader feels like having coffee even before completing it. Lovely poem. Full of intensity.... Full Marks. Thanks.

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Liza Sudina 14 October 2015

I' m also addicted to coffee, although it makes my heart beat 4 times faster. lovely poem!

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