Saturday, May 23, 2015

Coffee Comments

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Caressing me gentle
Overflowing energy
Flying on the wings strong
Fleeing doom of laziness
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Mr. M Jamal
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Yasmin Khan 01 July 2015

Brevity is the soul of wit'. Brief but expressive, I liked it because I am a great coffee lover.

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Mr. M Jamal 01 July 2015

Indeed. :) What keeps you going in today's rush is nothing but a sip of coffee.

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Sandra Feldman 01 June 2015

That's what a good cup of coffee, Certainly is. Excellent portrayal!

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Mr. M Jamal 02 June 2015

So kind of you Sandra :) Loving your take upon my poem :)

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Geetha Jayakumar 25 May 2015

Coffee is brewing in gentle way. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.

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Mr. M Jamal 25 May 2015

Thank you Geetha g :)

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