Saturday, October 24, 2009

Coffee Comments

Rating: 4.5

Bare feet carry that first cup of
morning to you full of night’s
disagreement black and
bitter without sweet apology.
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Val Morehouse
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Sandra Fowler 25 October 2009

Wonderful use of metaphor in the second stanza, particularly. I like what you see through the poetry panes of your soul. Love, Sandra

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