Wednesday, December 13, 2006

Codename - Mr. X Comments

Rating: 5.0

A tumble into fallen oak leaves
Bear hugs in the anonymous motel rooms
That awful taquila
I'll never forget your gaze -
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Masha Danevasha
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Ted Sheridan 01 June 2007

Never sleep with the enemy unless you are prepared to be taken prisoner.

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Original Unknown Girl 19 December 2006

Fab write oh birthday girl! ! Most certainly a wife should never be a burden....... poor guy! ! At least he gave you something to consider! ! Excellently penned in your inimitable style! HG: -) xx

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Geoff Warden 14 December 2006

DEAR MS. DANEVASHA.........I shall truly bow unto thine write of this gem, , , , , , Wow, , , , , the powerful input in last statement of verse preceives Mr. X and a very impartial message, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , well conceived, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,

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Roger Bowman 14 December 2006

I love the title and the poemo is great Take care Roger

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