Wednesday, February 18, 2009

'Code Blue' Comments

Rating: 5.0

From Hospital Hill, the city lay dumb,
Dawn impregnated, wreathed in mist.
“Choose Life! ”its copper-clad acropolis
Constrained, “Your hour is not yet come.”
...
Read full text

Peter J White
COMMENTS
Sherrie Tappenden 14 April 2009

A wonderfully powerful poem. '...our banshee wail had scattered sleep; '. Excellent. The terrible fear that death may take you before you are ready, '...what guarantee I'd raise my boys to sing their own song, or see their rough-hewn blossoming.' The fierce nurse, all practicality and red-scrubbed tenderness. Pastor John and yourself, perhaps both going to the right place at the right time? Enjoyed this very much x

0 0 Reply
Peter J White

Peter J White

London, UK
Close
Error Success