Tuesday, February 20, 2024

Cocoon -Haiku Comments

Rating: 5.0

A pale brown cocoon,
on the blade of lemongrass,
blown by the proud wind.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 07 April 2024

Provides a nice visual. Liked

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 March 2024

Sheer intelligent thoughts in this precious vulnerable poem,5 Stars, and this loveliest brilliant poem goes to my Favourites.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 March 2024

The poem may explore the balance between resilience and vulnerability, emphasizing that growth often requires both.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 March 2024

The poem may explore the balance between resilience and vulnerability, emphasizing that growth often requires both. Sheer intelligent thoughts in this precious vulnerable poem,5 Stars, and this loveliest brilliant poem goes to my Favourites!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 March 2024

Resilience and Vulnerability: The cocoon shields and protects, yet it also leaves the inhabitant vulnerable.

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Rebecca Navarre 29 March 2024

An incredible feel spun into this! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 29 March 2024

Ever such Beautiful and tender thoughts painted here! .. Magnificent! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 29 March 2024

Such wonderous imagery! .. Capturing the heart! ..

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Rob Lamberton 22 February 2024

Your poems are full of natural splendor! !

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Rob Lamberton 22 February 2024

The lessons of nature presented with natural beauty!

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Indira Renganathan 21 February 2024

A true poet can not miss even a small happening in nature.. keen observation and a nice Haiku Rose...liked

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Nabakishore Dash 21 February 2024

Amazing Haiku.Really the wind was brutal and fierce.

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Anjandev Roy 21 February 2024

Meaningful piece..... thanks for sharing....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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