Monday, October 5, 2015

Cocoa Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes
At night
When I can’t sleep
And all I can focus on is how tight my skin feels
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Mae Chase
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John S 08 November 2015

Nice modern poem! Interesting how haywire our thoughts and emotions can go, running in all directions in such a short period of time and then poof... back to reality. Back to the present moment.

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Chinedu Dike 22 October 2015

Beautiful depiction of unpleasant effects of anxiety and insomnia, both which are integral parts of depression. A well articulated piece of poetry insightfully penned with conviction. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Mae. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Sofia Kioroglou 09 October 2015

I give it a ten! Excellent poem!

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Fabrizio Frosini 06 October 2015

you know, it happens I've just written a comment - on another poem - which can fits yours, also: Life is what it is.. we don't know much about it.. substantially, we don't know anything.. for such a reason it may be a burden to some (or many) of us. But we need to confront Life if we simply want to go on living.. And preparing a cup of cocoa in the middle of the night is surely a way to alleviate that burden, for a while.. ;) Thanks for sharing, Mae, and WELCOME at PoemHunter Ciao Fabrizio

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Allotey Abossey 06 October 2015

Poem well written friend. Stay blessed

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Kelly Kurt 06 October 2015

I think this happens to most of us, at least from time to time. Nicely written, Mae. Thanks

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