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Cows milked: mitigated mooing in the meadows then
Weaving on the warp, some workaholic women
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A great oral picture of Nature, life and glob. I admire your delicate style in poetry.
A dazzling concoction with beautifully times words composed with delicacy of a songbirds voice. You give nature her voice. Fantastic
Excellent narration of life's scenes, exploring the essence of existence!
wow! this is really wonderful, magic of alliteration, you executed excellently! 10
Safari...poaching my mind with your prose so divine...pup...read If...If you will.
I can imagine you reading this. I think you would jazz it up :) I liked.....Ravers out on the razzle raising a raucous razz-ma-tazz brilliant use of words to make your poem sing :)
Hello S.zaynub this is a wonderful poem full of life and colour well done enjoyed reading
A unique poem, lively and sprightly :)