Friday, October 25, 2013

Cocktail Of Kalaeidoscope Comments

Rating: 5.0

(ALLITERATION)
Cows milked: mitigated mooing in the meadows then
Weaving on the warp, some workaholic women
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s.zaynab kamoonpury
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Yasmin Khan 19 December 2013

A unique poem, lively and sprightly :)

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Mehri Mehraban 02 November 2013

A great oral picture of Nature, life and glob. I admire your delicate style in poetry.

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Kevin Patrick 01 November 2013

A dazzling concoction with beautifully times words composed with delicacy of a songbirds voice. You give nature her voice. Fantastic

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Marvin Brato 01 November 2013

Excellent narration of life's scenes, exploring the essence of existence!

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Wahab Abdul 29 October 2013

wow! this is really wonderful, magic of alliteration, you executed excellently! 10

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John Shea 27 October 2013

Safari...poaching my mind with your prose so divine...pup...read If...If you will.

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Dave Walker 27 October 2013

A real mixed bag of pictures, a great poem.

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David Mclansky 27 October 2013

A fine poem going around the world

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Ruth Walters 26 October 2013

I can imagine you reading this. I think you would jazz it up :) I liked.....Ravers out on the razzle raising a raucous razz-ma-tazz brilliant use of words to make your poem sing :)

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Matt Mooney 26 October 2013

Rich in its language and imagery. I enjoyed reading it.10.

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Noreen Carden 26 October 2013

Hello S.zaynub this is a wonderful poem full of life and colour well done enjoyed reading

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Lyn Paul 26 October 2013

What a great cocktail you have mixed.

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Mohammed Jafer 25 October 2013

fantastic. I like reading your poems. Very good.

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