Tuesday, June 12, 2012

Cockfosters… 12 June 12 Comments

Rating: 4.0

Paper neatly folded by his coat
I by the hording with my tote

Subway met every Monday morn
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Joanna Pavlides 02 September 2012

sexy read about rushed london life, interesting concept and probably a story that happens now again, enjoyed the read, thanks

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Deborah Cromer 09 August 2012

Interesting. Although I will have to read and maybe read again, one more time just to really, really look into this as a whole. Thank you! Deborah

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Roong S 24 July 2012

You write so well..! !

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Corrina Kavea 29 June 2012

wow I like that one- candles in London aye hmmmmm

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Indira Babbellapati 18 June 2012

does subject matter to ur versatile pen...er, key-board, u can fit anything (anyone?) into ur couplet mode doc! :)

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Ruth Walters 17 June 2012

Cockfosters eh, the central line, I used to travel on the Central line but not that end of it and I see you've experienced the way they pack us in on the trains, interesting poem. Ruth

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Karen Sinclair 16 June 2012

A classy write which i enjoyed... clever title also....tyvm karen

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Medht Ghussn 13 June 2012

Wonderful my dear friend

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