Cock Soft Comments

Interesting piece.

If you send me a TITLE and ASK me to read the poem, I probably will. Which of MY poems did you enjoy? ? hmm?

You seemed (in a message to me) to want me to read some one or more of your poems. Today I've read two, including one I'd left a comment on months ago, and probably told you I had in a message.

Thomas, I'm glad, for you, that my PH friend Linda Bella enjoyed your second stanza. I did not. I tend towards writing and appreciating (and understanding) lines whose words are to be taken literally, not symbolicallly.

I don't THINK this poem will be (unread by me as yet) about a limp rooster. Will it be 'bout somethin' needin' a 'hormone booster'?

A brutally honest look at one of life's everyday problems. I think the second stanza is very powerful. The images are extremely well done.