Tuesday, April 28, 2009

Cobwebs Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am dusting off the cobwebs
from the back roads of my mind
hoping that I will find
some old loves I left behind.
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David Harris
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Alison Cassidy 07 May 2009

Cobwebs and nostalgia go together beautifully - as you have demonstrated in this quietly reflective poem about choices, memories and a little regret. It's interesting sometimes to cogitate about what sort of a different alternative choices might have made. Your poem is accessible and nicely phrased. I did enjoy it. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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I saw the title Cobwebs and thought this will be good. It sure is! It's got a great flow and some memories never fade. Thanks for sharing David. 10 Karin Anderson

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Joseph Poewhit 28 April 2009

Poem has a sensitive way about it

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