Saturday, March 1, 2008

Cobweb Comments

Rating: 5.0

The hanging taper dances like a girl
To soft melodic fast and vibrant music;
Trembles with bobbing head
And billows breeze-kissed arches
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Paul Butters
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Stone Granite 12 July 2008

I enjoyed this airy and 'delicate' (word stolen from Flora, but perfectly said) poem. It has a quality to it that floats.

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Flora Gillingham 12 May 2008

Helen's right! Love the delicacy of the words. Fx

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Original Unknown Girl 15 April 2008

This is beautiful - can't think why it's not been spotted before. I love the patterns cobwebs make in the rain. Lovely penning. HG: -) xx

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