Cobblestone Comments

What an exquisite picture your poem paints in the mind! Vivid imagery, childlike joy are encapsulated within just three stanzas. Thank you for sharing, Cigeng. I enjoyed it, immensely!

What a delightful picture this poem paints in the mind! Vivid imagery, gentle and childlike joy are encapsulated in just three stanzas...Thank you for sharing, Cigeng. I enjoyed it, immensely!

The cobbles are tiny stars in the river Their delicate light spread on the ripple what an imagination! ! ! tiny stars of the river.... the boy at the riven bank.... sooooooo fine and so good and beautiful. thank you dear poet. tony

tiny stars in the river, very fine..