Tuesday, January 5, 2016

Coastal Storm Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sculpted alabaster gulls on naked stones
Shrug drooping wings while winter crazy weather
Spits tear-salt rain into feather muted solitude
And sailor haunted flaws flute to hungry seas.
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Roseann Shawiak 02 February 2016

Hauntingly beautiful, thoughts and imagery crashing through the silence. Really great poem, thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Ratnakar Mandlik 05 January 2016

The crazy weather of winter and it's impact on life and nature on sea and sea shore very wonderfully depicted in this short and sweet poem penned adroitly. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Janet Mary Zylstra

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